Poems and Stories

Wednesday, November 19, 2014

A Time To Kill...Keith or What Happens in Como...

When Jake asked me to go on a hunting trip to Mississippi I was doubtful.  I’m not a hunter but I really wanted to go to see what it was like at a real Mississippi hunting camp.  You see I’m from the north and Jake is from Louisiana. That really shouldn’t matter but I think you can guess that there were some differences in how we looked at things.  We drove from New Orleans to a small town in the middle of Mississippi just north of Oxford. Jake found the driveway easily but all I saw was overgrown tangle of bittersweet and thorn bushes. We drove up the long winding driveway as I anticipated coming into a courtyard in front of a large rambling southern rustic hunting Camp. 

However the building was a vintage, aged southern plantation complete with wraparound porch tall columns in a series of outbuildings that, from a distance, looked like a movie set.  Jake drove his pickup right up close to the porch. That was when I noticed some serious differences between a classic movie set and a real-life scene from Deliverance. Three men were sitting around a stainless steel high-legged fire pot on various types of seating; a white moldy plastic fake Adirondack chair, a broken wooden high-back chair, the front seat passenger side of a Volkswagen beetle, and a wooden bench that look like it was about to collapse under the weight of a beaming, greasy, long haired drunk weighing at least 300 pounds.  He is set up with some effort but surprising grace and introduce himself as Norfleet Ruffin Sledge, the SIXTH, and welcomed me to his home and estate with an ice cold Budweiser.  As he threw his own empty bottle down a nearby well, I knew I was going to like this place.  When I saw two all-terrain vehicles in the yard and 4-5 rifles and shotguns leaning up against the crumbling porch, I knew I was going to love it. 

We threw another hunk of some ancient looking plank onto the fire and everyone stood up to greet Jake warmly, cursing and teasing good-naturedly and of course passed around more beer.
“Hey Jake and Tom, throw your stuff in the house, get your guns, and let’s go take a drive!”
We headed up the broken steps to the more broken porch, opened a rusted wooden screen door and walked into hell.  The room was a smelly shambles of moldy mattresses on rusty metal springs and piles of muddy, wet hunting clothes in every corner.  Three TV’s were on in three different rooms all playing the same porno-video tape over and over with the volume turned down to a low moan.  Jake walked over to the cleanest bed, picked up all the blankets, clothing along with some stale Fritos and empty beer bottles and threw the bundle into the nearest corner chair.  He then cleared the bed next to his and spread out a clean blanket and our own sleeping bags before he put down any of his clothing and gear.  I did the same.  In a few minutes we were outside and climbed into an old Ford Bronco which was running in the driveway with Norfleet in the passenger side and two men in the backseat. The driver seat was empty.  I thought it was for the designated driver but it appears that when Jake arrives he always drives.  I learned much later that this was probably a very good idea and kept most of us alive.

More beer was passed around and we started down one of the trails leading away from the house.  Just as we entered the woods at sunset another car pulled into the driveway it was a late model Ford or Chevy, looked very clean and somehow out of place.  A small, thin, nervous young man jumped out of the car, waved his hands excitedly at us and ran over to Jake’s window. I heard a collective groan from everyone in the Bronco and the words “Oh Shit, we are too late! Keith’s here!”

“Hi guys! Hi Jake!  Hows Valerie and the kids?”

“Shut-up Keith and get in the God damn truck if you are coming!”  (this was from all four men in the Bronco)

“OK guys! Just wait a minute until I change and I’ll be right back”


More shit and goddamnits and beer later, Keith returns with an obviously new or recently laundered Eddie Bauer down vest in Mossy Oak Camo, with matching zippered pants and an orange hat.  I get out, Norfleet gets out of the passenger seat, shoves Keith into the middle seat in the back and offers me his spot riding shotgun with Jake.   By now, it is getting dark so Jake turns on the one headlight and the one, opposite, foglight as well as the light bar (with 2 of 4 lights out) and we roared off into the dark down one of the many trails made just wide enough for an ATV or one truck...

  to be continued - stopped here  on 11/11/14 at 7 am  - FTC

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